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I don't like what I see by ~Gwilith:iconGwilith:



I don't like what I see

I can't wake up
I am stuck
in a state of dreaming

My reality hurt
I closed up
and I canīt grasp
What realy is there

I panic, I scream
But itīs only in my head
Outside, in reality
I am dead
©2006-2009 ~Gwilith
:icongwilith:

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My five minutes of emoness. This is the result. Written during English.

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:iconfiremyth:
aww c'est bon! :hug:
have some chocolate!

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"The world's grey enough without making it worse
What we need is individuality!" Expressing Yourself, Billy Elliot
:icongwilith:
Yay! thanks :hug:

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He could stay in my memory, a thing of beauty and a boy forever
:iconfiremyth:
no problem :glomp:

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"The world's grey enough without making it worse
What we need is individuality!" Expressing Yourself, Billy Elliot
:iconh-johanna:
aww really sad, but atm you have no reason to be sad you should write happy love poems.

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I promise I won't bite... much
:icondrowning-soul:
wow death is never discribed like that before...
well done
love it

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Hey.... now its really easy to visit my profile :Djust *click* on the avatar :OI won't bite.... much
:icondrowning-soul:
btw i dont fear it XD

klein ongelukje

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Hey.... now its really easy to visit my profile :Djust *click* on the avatar :OI won't bite.... much
:icongwilith:
Yay! Thanks for the comment and the fav. :hug:

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He could stay in my memory, a thing of beauty and a boy forever
:icongwilith:
I know...That's why it's written in my 5 minutes of emoness :D
Anyways, for happy love poems, check this out: [link]

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He could stay in my memory, a thing of beauty and a boy forever
:icondrowning-soul:
Your welcome^^

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Hey.... now its really easy to visit my profile :Djust *click* on the avatar :OI won't bite.... much

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